put to fly small bird


put to fly small bird
today, clear weather, the sunlight is brilliant, ten thousand insides have no cloud, the small bird sings in the head, the big tree dances in the earth, the bee is industriously adopting honey, and everything is so serene and fine.
I return to in home and see doorway many a pair of shoe, then know home visitor.I changed shoe to go in a to see, is the aunt whom I like most to come to all give me the pocket money each time.
I walk into once the living room see, discover that the aunt brought a small bird and a birdcage this time and knew that the aunt wants to send the small bird to me, I am then jubilantly happy.After saying a voice a thanks, I immediately embraced my baby to enter my secret cabin.
I cautiously observed small bird, it had aureate feather, Huang Huang's mouth and a rightness of lovely eyes are really lovely pole!I more see more like it!The appearance that I want to see very much the small bird sings, drinks water and eat then goes fetch food and water, the small bird neither eats nor drink, don't evens lift to sing.I felt suspicious, small bird how exactly?
I how also can not tell that it has by the side of the small bird body what problem, then think that it is shy with strangers very much, hide in the dark place to stealthily observe it.I saw all seek for a long time not wrong, intend to turn around to return to, but even now I discovered it's a bit not in the right:Why does the small bird have been hoping a window?Gradually, I discover that the small bird isn't a within sight window, but within sight blue sky.I quickly consider, I finally discover this small bird and I see differently at the outside.The small bird on the sky is very happy, but the small bird in the cage is depressed and not talking much, I calculated it to want regression great universe, I was very self-contradict, but end I still endured pain silently to put small bird.
the mother know that I put small bird, the pain scolded me, my surface packs very sadly, but my in the mind is much more comfortable, feel that everythings all released.
female:I am 17 years old to run away, you at me nearby.My completely helpless of time, is you at me nearby.I was brokenhearted, is still you at me now nearby.I discover now
male:Does this want to the rhythm that I vindicate?!
female:I discover now that your TM isn't a comet! The fantasy type composition is to suppose a kind of scene, the author completes with the imagination of composition.For example, 《if I am to help male 》, 《 stand at what the moon top thoughts of 》, 《 Mr. Yu and the second-time meeting of Zhi Sou 》, 《 after 20 years my a day 》 etc..The characteristics of this kind of question in composition test is:The freedom is vivid, unrestrained, thought to be free from restriction, can maneuver to gallop about, soar to the skies hover.Writing this composition has to notice following what time:

a, have to be concrete but meticulous of description.Is concrete but meticulous of the description is a composition image vivid essential condition.Abstract general, there is no concrete case, impossible attraction reader.If write 《if I am help male 》 , should concentrate to write like 23 concrete cases, some classmate each one firsts are if my benefit is male, keep on connecting is me would ever how.Being each is tenth, 35, totally wrote a segment, is all dry and hard, the contents is dishonest at, be in need of image.

two, have to have an explicit topic.The fantasy type composition has to extremely and extensively choose material world, but this not that it can thought of what write what, it is also similar to the composition of other types, have to have an explicit topic, the material chosen has to surround this topic.《If I am benefit Mr. 》 is this composition, its topic should is be like help male so suppress strong hand weak, Cheng the bad Yang is kind, choose of the material will can embody this.But some classmates after writing become to help male assiduous delve into science, acquired a national science and technology prize, this visited to leave topic.

three, go into to have to be quick.Write this composition, had better direct from condition and details commence and abandon the whole set of words.But some composition opening remarkses of classmates are too many, slowly said a lot of words of surpluses, such as while writing 《Mr. Yu and the second-time meeting of Zhi Sou 》 , what determined old fool can move a mountain is a literary reference, this literary reference contains deep meaning, etc., rounded a few turn sons first, then went into, garrulous, not very simple and direct.

four, have to have reality basis.Fantasy type composition expression of mostly author of ideal, the ideal is to realistically fold light, it can attain or can carry out after effort.There is a classmate that write 《if I am help male 》 , say to help the teacher whom Mr. calls on sick A, the treasure is 1, make the low short cabin become a big house(next 88) right away, and spacious brightness, the sunlight is ample.This is the establishment in the realistic foundation of, because of constructing a house like this for teacher is become realistic.If change so:Teacher A lives in the cave, dark damp, help a male, immediately become a palace of magnificent, teacher AN is correcting a homework in the palace, this doesn't suit actual.

the contents of fantasy type composition usually is an ideal life, full of truth among them, also usually is expressing of author's intense emotion.Thus, had better write with the style of writing of glow with enthusiasm and joyful alacrity.