2015年1月3日星期六

View ice light

View ice light
last year winter vacation, the mother takes I sit ascend west go to of train, arrive at north ice city Harbin.
after arriving the that very day supper of Harbin, I step the twilight of setting sun, arrived at landscape charming loose flower river's side and walked into beautiful ice city with mother.
a walk into ice city city gate, the first ice vulture that comes into view first is a Charng-er to flew to the moon.The that shape engaging and beautiful and moving Charng-er is embracing moon to fly to the sky.I am infatuated with by this lifelike image, also have a kind of medicine once wore cloudy regions to fly up palace of the moon of felling.
immediately after, I walked to go into that transparent high big cloth to reach to pull a temple again, not from thought of loose great stem cloth and text to become scene for princess to manage Tibet.
hope that ice vulture, I really have some dimmed eyesight confused, eyes not the Xia answered.That on the ice vulture meticulous wood grain, all embody sculptor with meticulous care and toil.
imperceptibly was already dead hour, but still kept still being that so jollification in this loose flower river's side.
in the way home, I often turn head and reluctant to part with ground to hope beautiful ice city.Saw again, beautiful ice city, although I come in a hurry, go to also in a hurry, can you that beautiful landscape but profoundly print at my brain in.Next year winter vacation, I also come of, see more gorgeous and colorful, the ice vulture of much more beautiful Zi.Chinese composition net famous master point reviews:
be mentioned various ice lights, but have no fragmentary and describe a not good enough felling, on the contrary can give people in riotous profusion many Zis, eyes not the Xia answer of enjoy.The reason lies in author to use the most to the point most the phrase language of refinement describe the characteristics of different ice light, terminology speech pole Chien, but is a word word to order Jing, read come if face its territory, if see its form, if smell its voice.

A special Chinese New Year

A special Chinese New Year
quick annually till the time in Chinese New Year, father's cellular phones all accepted the information of more than 100 wishes, outside was also full of happiness, pleased celebrate, tense atmosphere.People are busy in preparing the goods in year, people who do a part-time job prepare to give their own family's gifts and go home and own close relatives rejoice family reunion and tell oneself to take place for a the middle of the year of affair.
but this year, our family have never returned to see my elder sister, elder brother, younger brother and the younger sisters, there are also the most painful my grandmother, the in the mind has a kind of unspeakable lose, looking at circumferential persons to all go and own close relatives have a reunion, don't lift me have much suffered.
Chinese New Year's Day, in early morning father, mother makes me coming out from the bedding lira and drove car to take me and leave family, I am still in a dazely arriving at a long long big bridge in the sleeping up, an eye could not hope a side seem the whole bridge and sky connect similar, that distance fan is fond of and receives of in fog, see a mountain around around unclearly, below the hills have limitless ocean, there is at the sea also a steamer, be really grand view, beauty, I absolutely similar in the fairyland, !Originally this is the boat mountain to sail across ocean big bridge.
close behind, we are taking ship to a peach blossom island, take ship troublesome, buy a ticket, check ticket and take the seat to the number, troublesome!Sit is going on board cabin, curiosity, I can not sit over there, I run to the view view set, arrive to before see, sees the ship both sides river's water form a wave of wave tide and arrive to behind see, sees a river water from underneath upwards emit formation white of wave flower, the sea water pares off breeze to blow me of neck inside, cool!
very quick we arrived at a peach blossom island, the scenery of peach blossom island made people have 1 kind wants to live as recluse mountain in of felling, there the scenery still keep still keeping existing, it is said that here is the place that takes 《shoot vulture hero to spread 》 .I saw Guo Jing Da Dun Xia's old village in cow house in the house, I was most interesting is practicing a peach blossom stake, it is said that, yellow when Guo Jing Da Dun Xia sought the yellow apothecary's daughter, Huang Rong, in those early years the apothecary made Guo Jing lead a peach blossom stake.I practiced for a long time, didn't also do well, I still bought a shoot the bow and arrow that the vulture is used, once walk one and other view area, imitate a Buddha, I am also that a member of the story inside, lake water is very quiet very beautiful, the sky is quickly black, I unwilling to partly left a peach blossom island.
I am still dead silent in the peach blossom island on the way home, until father calls I, I just wide awake.Father asks me:Like this Chinese New Year?I loudly of answer:Like very much!

happy night


happy night
Saturday evening, I see mother little Lee of my classmate and her mother, rented two pair person's bicycles, go for a ride together.
we along road in the seashore is all the way ex- to go.Road China light in seashore of the evening Gao Zhao, the cool sea breeze lightly fondles our cheekses, very pleasing.We through overseas Chinese park, along medium hill path, and then turned into park in the star lake.Little Li Shuo:Let's walk in park in the star lake?I say:Go!We then drink water to stop for rest in park in the star lake and appreciate a beautiful night scene.Sky starlight flicker, curved curved of the moon miss seem to be towarding us to smile.The tree Yu Yu spring onion of inside in park in the star lake spring onion, many old men are under the tree companion wear music do square to hold and also have many people to play chess, play poker under the tree, everywhere one joys the peaceful atmosphere of the song joke
strolled 1 turn in park in the star lake, we the then original road return, half-way through Lin Bai Xin's square, we decide that the square goes up to play again.We stop car to depend a wayside, then the lawn for square goes up kickball.We raise head and look while taking a rest, ha, does the sky have one Shan the colourful star of one Shan, red of, purple of, green of, blue of connect into one, we ask respectively of mother:Mother, is that what things?The mother says:Don't know, you study by yourselves!We curiously and once in a very long while stare at the sky.Little Li Shuo:Should can't be a lot of helicopters to fly up a sky?I say:Is impossible!Can't the meeting be the kite that will give out light?Little Lee tooks a look on all sides and says:You see, a persons who flies a kite all have no, how may be a kite?I think:If can take airplane to see actually good.At this time, flank a kid and his fathers prepare to fly a kite, once we see, that flickering and flaring kite in the his hand just such as sky of colourful only similar, is really the kite that will give out light, is really too magic, we the conflicting views ground rounds a kid to ask this to ask that, different meeting became a good friend with him.Our three people puts to fly flaring kite together and runs about wildly on the lawn, happy pole.
Saturday's evening, we spent a happy time.I think:With friends together, the life will become more fine! The beginning high school student's composition usually faces a problem, then hard put to write an article vivid, substantial but concrete, usually the article is the sentence of big vernacular type.Thus the composition on the other hand seems to be very crone, on the other hand word number ascend also not enough.In order to work out everyone's problem, introduce here a kind of let the composition become more substantial method, then expand sentence construction.The classmates can have the training to consciously carry on this aspect in the process practice a writing in the peacetime. Hope everyone hereafter write the time of composition can is a kind of mode of thinking this kind of technique to carry on training, this is better mode of thinking that carries on a literature writing to train.(Next 88)namely while finishing writing a sentence, can try and ask this sentence how, for example you wrote a person and wrote him very sad.Can launch a thinking at this time, he is how sad, sad arrive what extent, sad of time do what once these things think, the sentence again writing out at least can succeed in escaping the writing of water type, the first step attains substantial concrete.Asked sentence how behind, can adopt as follows two kinds of methods to carry on an enlargement to the sentence. 1, add a modifier phrase again before the language in the phrase.(Particularly verb and modifier is before the phrase) plus a modifier phrase again before the language(particularly verb and modifier phrase) in the phrase, the sentence is whole will become decorous, if the student can notice the literary grace of polishing the phrase in the process of adding to polish a phrase, so whole sentence would be full of a literary grace concretely. For example want to write a sentence, I study hard, a lot of alumni associations write into I make great effort very much study.At this time can ask this effort exactly is how to make great effort?Also namely give to add a modifier phrase hard.Can from the action, the mental etc. adds, like this and more after wanting, the student can write holds firmly each penny such as me diligent for each time study.I am for canning make the mother more happy but study more hard.Of the type more concrete sentence. 2, add to explain after a certain sentence the language is after a words finishes saying and considers, for this sentence, can explain this sentence with a concrete sentence, this is also to write the sentence long, the sketch moves of a method. For example writing teacher's personality is quiet, at this time can at quiet after plus an explanation sentence to explain the teacher exactly is how the personality is quiet, this kind of is been quiet to embody what behavior up this, some classmates may can write quiet such as teacher's personality, in addition to having a class, all don't say what rubbish.Teacher's personality is quiet, among three years that he takes, never fierce to a student lead.The etc. more concrete sentence.