2014年12月17日星期三

a candy stick


a candy stick
today, I am very happy!
this morning's time, the teacher announced and said:The classmates will send this afternoon our Zhang Jia Yu comrade of class to take part in to tell a story game!Hope everyone adds for her!The teacher says I feel ashamed not to go quickly.Slice!Have what fantastic!My suddenly and violently and perhaps the members whisper.If you make a speech not good of words, you to must rise that Pie one Na?Slice, I once said, the older generation son of Zhang Jia Yu was lecture house, whole life is a dogs meat dumplings tops not the chicken heart of seat!Suddenly and violently and perhaps the members say Be getting tooer many, I am different an express.You theses will behind speak small words at the other people of is a really truely positive chicken heart!
in the afternoon soon is come, I be still lecture mistake, the classmates all joke I!I am very sad, connect a few good friends, all joke I, section 1 lesson be over after, the teacher gave me a candy stick.Teacher, I I I mistook, do you return to eat for my candy stick?I am very happy and sad.You have already been getting more very good!Appear on stage to make a speech for the first time, unavoidably mistake of, fell down to climb ground again, hereafter opportunity much get BE!The teacher says
a candy stick, so simple, Chien is simple list of candy stick, Chien simple list of encouragement. After the Ju ground in rules in the composition completes, the foundation that can get hold of structure cent, but if use some methods let article of the structure seem to be more skillful, attraction the reader's eyeball, will on the structure cent in article up be added a cent.Below introduce a few kinds to let the composition conceive outline more skillful method, hope to have a help to each early high school student. 1, the constitution hang a pronunciation constitution to hang to read the best way nothing is better than in establish to ask in the beginning, in the composition beginning then ask a question for reader, the form can be to ask a sentence as well as only is a description, but usually seem to be fantastic in the affair of beginning and not agree with normal regulations, so the ability produce a question in the reader's heart and lead its interest, let it produce to expect to the continuation mental. Is a sky such as 《match seller's little girl 》 beginning cold pole, snow snow, again quickly black.(Next 88)this is a year of the last day-Lunar New Year's Eve.In this cold and black evening, a light wears a head barefoot little girl to walk down the street.This beginning relatively has an attraction, because it established a lot of questions for reader.What is the little girl a stem?Being so cold sky of is still a Lunar New Year's Eve.She why a person walk down the street, also baldheaded barefoot?The reader naturally wants to downwards read. 2, suppress a Yang method so-called suppress Yang of method, after including to suppress first Yang or first the Yang suppress behind.What this method says is be you truely want to express a certain praise or blame emotion of time, don't express in the beginning, but come out in the beginning contrary aspect performance, immediately after just started expressing the expressional aspect that you think.If the novel of gold Yong 《smile the Ao river's lake 》 depiction makes blunt teacher Yue of fox not cluster, then with the desire suppress the skill of Yang first, start Yue not the cluster describe into a Ci father good teacher of image, gave the gentleman sword that his virtuous personage takes it as a great honor the title;But arrive a behind, this Ci father make use of daughter's happiness to attain private interest, this good teacher kill oneself's disciple for selfishness.Open gentleman sword in really and completely cunning mean person, bring about Wu Lin Zhong's Xing breeze blood rain for greed.Thus too many of need not language descriptions, only front and back a contrast, the despicable its human nature exposes entirely.But 《the absolute being vulture Xia Lyu 》 description over then used the desire Yang suppresses first of skill. Suppress a Yang method actually is contrast thinking of a kind of, writing want to notice.The purpose of suppressing is a Yang, suppress of contents for the sake of betterly Yang.Finally want to express the meaning that you want to express most . 3, the misunderstanding method misunderstanding come from interpersonal or the false comprehension of the person to the thing.Misunderstanding the method is to point in the literature work, a square of the person brings about misunderstanding on another square(or a certain matter), or 2 people misunderstand each other and cause an antinomy thus and push details development and make thus the great waves of person emotion in multiple layers pass into, versatile.The so-called person is expensive to keep, text expensive song, monotonous is a composition to greatly hate, but want to let the article rise and fall to fall Dang, moving, the Qiao establishes a misunderstanding not to lose to a kind of good method.

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